Dear Lord! Someone who has watched the Shogun Series and isn't illiterate please clean this article up.  As it stands its so atrociously written it gives me a headache trying to read it.  And this is by no means the only article where this is true: the entire site needs a thorough clean up to make it not sound like a retarded toddler wrote everything.McJediProbie (talk) 23:17, September 10, 2013 (UTC)

If yer in th' mood ta be such a darned critic, "McJediProbie", just fix it yerself. Else, stop complainin' 'bout it. Thaanks.

Miss Ruena (talk) 00:16, September 11, 2013 (UTC)